Writing Services
Detailed Feedback on…
$300 for Feature Screenplays & Plays (scripts longer than 120 pages +$5 per page)
$150 for Teleplays & Shorts (scripts longer than 60 pages +$5 per page)
$1,000 for Fiction & Nonfiction Books up to 100,000 words*
*Book feedback prices can fluctuate up or down depending on the total number of words, turnaround time, writing quality, etc. The shorter your book is and the better shape it’s in, the less work I’ll have to do, and the less you’ll have to pay. However, before I accept any payment, I will read the first 5-10 pages to determine if I’m your target audience. If I don’t think I can help you improve your book for any reason, I won’t take your money.
Turnaround time is usually less than one month but can usually be expedited for an additional fee depending on needs.
Other services include Screenwriting, Adaptations, Ghostwriting, Social Media, Copywriting, Content Creation, Technical Writing, Journalism, Medical & Health Writing, Blogs, Grant Writing, Press Releases, Speeches, Resumes, Jokes, and Email Marketing.
- All Feedback Includes…
- Concept & Premise (two most important selling points)
- Structure (heavily influenced by genre, length, etc.)
- Characters (Introductions, Needs vs Wants, Goals vs Fears, Backstory vs Arc, Motivations & Development)
- Plot (Rising Action, Twists, landmark scenes like Inciting Incident, Pinch, Midpoint, All Is Lost & Power Within, Climax)
- Dialogue (Subtext, Emotional Impact, Realistic, On-the-Nose)
- Writing Quality (Descriptions, Action, Pace, Flow, Emotional Journey, Entertainment Value)
- Proofreading (Grammar, Typos, Format, Spelling, etc.)
- Marketability (Themes, Target Audience, Budget, Comps, Title)
- Revision Suggestions (detailed outline of entire script)
- Zoom session of up to two hours to fully discuss feedback is available for an additional $100
- Feedback on Outlines, Treatments, Loglines, Query Letters & Pitches are available for an additional fee depending on needs
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